User:DixieButts915

From Boris Epstein

In the awesome design of things you actually receive a B- just for hard work. Where exactly you misplaced everybody was first in your facts. As they say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, let me say to you what exactly did deliver the results. Your writing is actually pretty powerful which is probably why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, despite the fact that I can easily notice a jumps in reason you make, I am not sure of how you appear to connect the ideas that produce the conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your point however trust in the near future you connect your dots much better..com ppi